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#1 messiaen

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Posted 01 February 2012 - 07:09 AM

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Posted 01 February 2012 - 08:11 AM

Yummy.
I kinda wish you would add some sort of very simple and minimalistic techno-like melody.

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Posted 02 February 2012 - 10:36 AM

Wow the kick is heavy. I think its a bit too heavy imo. You can't hear that little riff over the top of it too well maybe try give that a bit more brightness. Otherwise not bad quite dug the minimalist vibe of it but as Squee said another layer or two would help I feel.

#4 messiaen

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Posted 02 February 2012 - 02:57 PM

cheers guys, yeah i made it on monday on an acid comedown, i think certainly what i need to do it now is go back and make it a hell of alot more interesting. im definetely getting alot closer to the integrity of bass that i need, but im still stuck producing on a massive hi-fi, i really have no idea what this sounds like on most soundsystsems, i need to splash out on some monitors.

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Posted 03 February 2012 - 01:32 AM

View PostSquee, on 01 February 2012 - 08:11 AM, said:

Yummy.
I kinda wish you would add some sort of very simple and minimalistic techno-like melody.

I totally agree. I like the track a lot so far but I think it still needs something that grabs the listener's attention more. It is all very, very subtle at the moment.

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Posted 03 February 2012 - 10:20 AM

some really pretty things in here, good texture.  commented on sc also.

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Posted 03 February 2012 - 04:15 PM

hey mess this is pretty nice... stuff to sort/add but I'm not the man to tell you.
ps. i'm fucked.

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Posted 03 February 2012 - 09:02 PM

cheers keltoi and a/d, im pretty excited just now, things in glasgow are heating up bigtime, me and my friends have taken over the main afterparty unit, my production skills are definetely getting there, i think in maybe about 12 months il be making some really nice shit. i belted this tune out in about 8 hours fucked off my tits, im gonna go back to it over the next few weeks and get it sculpted and soundin nice.

ps, i am also off my fuckin tits