Qatarsis Posted April 5, 2014 Share Posted April 5, 2014 Hey guys I'd like to share my new track 'Exotic State of Mind' and would like to know what you think about it :) I appreciate any kind of suggestions, critic etc. enjoy !https://soundcloud.com/qatarsis/exotic-state-of-mindbest regardsqatarsis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
th555 Posted April 5, 2014 Share Posted April 5, 2014 The piano works quite well. Sometimes piano's sound a bit cheesy in this type of tracks, but that's not the case here. The beat is nice and all, but the track is maybe a bit too long for the amount of ideas presented. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qatarsis Posted April 9, 2014 Author Share Posted April 9, 2014 thanks th555 :) yeah, i could shorten some parts really to get it around 4 minutes or so, i get your point, i'll see if i'm going to correct that soon thanks for taking time !cheers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted April 9, 2014 Share Posted April 9, 2014 Yeah, I agree with th555 about the length. Also, I think you should think about doing something about the snare. Maybe change it up a bit or add more variations, because it's a very prominent snare which then means that you quickly notice that it's just the same snare over and over. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Operativ Posted April 10, 2014 Share Posted April 10, 2014 I got a very industrial feel from this track, maybe it's the snare and overall rhythm like the others pointed out. could easly be part of a soundtrack of a movie or game, good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qatarsis Posted April 16, 2014 Author Share Posted April 16, 2014 @Squee: thanks alot for the feedback, i get your point, the snare is very static and some variation would give a more dynamic feel, i see if i'll find some time to fix that @operativ: yeah, the kick / snare give somehow a hard/industrial feel i think..veeery very glad to hear that man ! that's actually what i'm aiming at, some soundtrack / cineatic stuff is what i like :) cheers guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hybernation Posted April 18, 2014 Share Posted April 18, 2014 this reminded me of something nine inch nails did back in the day was a bit long maybe some more fx here n there?? apart from that good tune Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arror Posted August 15, 2014 Share Posted August 15, 2014 yea I think adding some effects to the drums/snare (delay and reverb ) intermittently would help a lot with the mix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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