hey sine, this is really good! all the elements on the track fit well in my opinion, the melody and the overall build up keeps me interested throughout.
the only thing that i would change is the snare sound that starts at 0:59, it's a bit dry and it stands out more than it should imo. also maybe try to slowly change the sound of the melody synth from the 2nd half onwards? smth as simple as increasing the resonance, the release, or playing around with the delay effect could elevate the song even more.