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I'm watching Black Lagoon, very interesting and I really like how each episodes ends with the same dark song.

Bell Workout Thoughts While Listening : Positive Feedback : Subjective Criticism :

This is my first reply to a thread in this forum ; I'm going to test out a 'feedback template' which will most likely be changed over time, let me know what you think! --- Thoughts While Listening : START- 0:07 -> I like this flanger effect and how it also modulates the stereo/mono space. 0:08 - 0:24 -> This reminds me of the beginning of a Pink Floyd song. 0:52 - 1:05 -> There seems to be more activity being picked up here, though it kind of fades away later on, teasing! 2:33 - END -> I'm a huge fan of tracks ending similar to how they began, I like that you did that here. Positive Feedback : If I had to put a style to this, I would say this is something like what you hear in video games. A lot of Nintendo, Sega, Capcom, etc. music has this sort of vibe that is 'continuous'. I don't think it is particularly easy to achieve this, since potentially the track can repeat 'forever' and not seem repetitive ; well done here! Each sound, bloop, bleeps, synths have their own place in the spectrum, which keeps the brain busy listening. The 'feel' of the track is not lost at any point, which is a good thing in my opinion. Subjective Criticism : Perhaps it was your goal, but this track plateaus early on in the beginning and remains the same throughout. There are many uses for this, but in my opinion I think this track would shine brighter if there was some energy picked up later on. Of course, this would not be the case if the purpose of this track is to remain within the same vibe/frequency throughout, which is what is achieved here. I expected ~0:49 for some melody to appear and start giving us a different message, though this didn't happen. I think that you could easily write a melody on top of the ones you currently have in order to accentuate the overall feel of the track. Also, I think that you could further develop the track by removing some of the elements in some areas and bringing them back in other (this is the less-is-more idea!) This will make them stand out more when they do return!

By the 2nd mention of "read [...] rules" in this thread, I figured out I made a mistake. Y'all are really nice about it, though I don't want to see what y'all will do if I break them a second time.

I'm still here, its just a lot of messages to reply to hah Also I'm reading through the boards here

Great to meet y'all! I've linked my stuff in my profile if you guys are interested. I'm also on Instagram: @endquote.inst I'm gonna start looking around, thanks for the warm welcome!

I thought there would be a "introduce yourself" board here , is there ? Anyways , just saying hello to everyone , I'm new here ; haven't looked around enough but I bet I'm going to enjoy this forum :]