Dale Posted May 30, 2007 Share Posted May 30, 2007 my new song: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Kaiser Posted May 30, 2007 Share Posted May 30, 2007 that high pitched beat hurts my ears >_< besides that, i liked it, very good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dale Posted May 31, 2007 Author Share Posted May 31, 2007 lol thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ۞ Syntheme ۞ Posted May 31, 2007 Share Posted May 31, 2007 i really like this track! it's got the mentalist bits in there, but you haven't over seasoned the soup/ v. cool but, that stuff going on between 7 and 9 khz is still ringing in my ears! it's way louder than anything else, check the fft snapsot i took: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dale Posted May 31, 2007 Author Share Posted May 31, 2007 haha i have now corrected track. will be up soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dale Posted May 31, 2007 Author Share Posted May 31, 2007 a bit quicker this time round Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ۞ Syntheme ۞ Posted May 31, 2007 Share Posted May 31, 2007 wickeder! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tht! tne Posted May 31, 2007 Share Posted May 31, 2007 i thought this was gonna be glitch for the sake of glitch but then the beat came in i like it i forget sometimes that listening to electronic music jades me this is relatively exceptional my favorite part is at 1:42 and i like how the track mutates later on Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dale Posted May 31, 2007 Author Share Posted May 31, 2007 thanks for listening, im glad u liked it.. anymore feedback? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Promo Posted May 31, 2007 Share Posted May 31, 2007 Intro was too long. This has an oldskool break/rave vibe to it but its subtle rave. More layers are needed I'd say. You need shorten this track and cut all that looping out because it gets repetive quickly. Also the break is at full charge for most of the track. It'd be better to build tension into it; for example dropping the hi hats out and reintroducing them. Also this track wouldn't be harmed if you introduced another break on top of the existing break to create more funk ala oldskool Prodigy. Overall it needs to get to the point quicker. Nice vibe though. The glitch work out at the end was kinda fun although I didn't feel it was totally necessarily. Didn't dislike this track because I can hear the potential in it but it needs to be fulfilled. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dale Posted June 1, 2007 Author Share Posted June 1, 2007 thanks, i will take your advice on board. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dale Posted June 9, 2007 Author Share Posted June 9, 2007 i altered track; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Ominous Posted June 9, 2007 Share Posted June 9, 2007 this one's not my cup of tea; *but*: i'm liking "greener on the other side" on your myspace player. a. lot!. i was like, it could use a sick breakdown right about now, and bam! there it was Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dale Posted June 9, 2007 Author Share Posted June 9, 2007 thank you dude, i tend to dabble in and out of different styles, and greener on the other side is one everyone likes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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