Fresh Blood Isn't Best

[Guest Pinflux]

New song with hospital noises...

 

Have a listen and let me know what you think. Critiques welcome!

 

http://www.myspace.com/pinfluxartist - second song down

[springymajig 3]

This is the best song ever and people who don't listen to it are made of dog poo.

 

My only criticism is to loose the myspace cos myspace is GHEY

[Guest Pinflux]

Thanks Springy :P

 

I've put up a direct download to the song here for anyone who's interested. Critiques would be nice *grovel* because I'm still pretty new to this music business and don't know if what I'm doing actually appeals to anyone.

[foresense 2]

sounds good to me! that break about a quarter through works wonders for the whole track, good idea. after that it runs a little dry though. you're on the right track, that's for sure!

[Squee 209]

Yeah! This is some great stuff... Could be a bit more aggressive though :grin:

[Guest Pinflux]

Hey thanks heaps for the feedback guys!

I'll keep 'em in mind for the next thing I do :D

 

PS your avatar rocks Forlon, wanna swap?

[foresense 2]

Well where's your avatar then? :laughing:

 

I got it from here: http://www.explodingdog.com/

 

The guy draws pictures according to sentences people send him. Classic site, he's been at it for years now.

[eugene 33]

i really loved the beats and all the percussion sounds, not sharp and loud but very effective. the melody is nice but not that memorable , the flute closer to the end is a really neat touch

[Guest Pinflux]

Forlorn - Avatar is go. Lemme know when you're ready to trade ;) That exploding dog site is an interesting one, have you ever been to the web comic

Spamusement? Similar kind of idea, though with spam email headers.

 

Eugene - Thanks heaps for your comment! Melodies are not really my strong point, I need to work on them more. I got the little bamboo panflute from my aunty and uncle for Christmas! :D I've been annoying my flatmates with it.

[foresense 2]

Alright cool, that's a very decent avatar.

 

Oh and hey it's forlon. I get that a lot, but I'm quite a happy guy really :wink2:

[Guest Pinflux]

Ah crap, the world I know and love is falling down around me :(

I've been calling you forlorn for two years now. Is it pronounced 'fallen' then?

 

You must know what Dane feels like when people refer to him as 'Springymagic'

[foresense 2]

Say I'm confused.. You've been posting here for two years already? Did you have another nick previously?

[Guest Pinflux]

Nope, Springy gave me a huge bunch of WATMM forumgoers music a couple of years ago now, and I've been lurking on the boards for about a year. *shifty eyes* Only really discovered electronic music in 2004 when I met him.

[foresense 2]

Man Springy is a great guy, this just shows you know. Awesome to hear.

[springymajig 3]

Man Springy is a great guy, this just shows you know. Awesome to hear.

 

 

Aaaaw... shucks :)

 

You guys just made it reeeeally confusing for me now, hehehe... I'm gonna think you're Forlon all the time now Jeremy :P