Dale Posted June 15, 2008 Share Posted June 15, 2008 Sort of new anyway, I finished it a few months back and never got round to posting it here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tht! tne Posted June 15, 2008 Share Posted June 15, 2008 i enjoyed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted June 16, 2008 Share Posted June 16, 2008 Overall: The melodies are a bit too random in my opinion, and I know you've made them sound out of tune on purpose but it may just be a bit too much. Around 2:10 the overall mood of the track gets a bit darker and I like this, but I think there's a bit too much reverb on the beat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest silencide Posted June 16, 2008 Share Posted June 16, 2008 Sounds are nicely chosen ;) Melodic parts are OK for me 95% of the track lenght... and I think that everything may be allright in a few listenings :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dale Posted June 16, 2008 Author Share Posted June 16, 2008 Overall: The melodies are a bit too random in my opinion, and I know you've made them sound out of tune on purpose but it may just be a bit too much. Around 2:10 the overall mood of the track gets a bit darker and I like this, but I think there's a bit too much reverb on the beat. I'm open to criticism otherwise I would not have posted this track of mine here. I don't tend to post much over here anymore, however I wanted to post this one I don't quite understand what you mean by the melodies being random? There are different arrangements in the melodies to create more of a variation for the listener and to keep the track more interesting by having varied stages of the track as a whole e.g. you mentioned that you liked the part around 2.10 because it took on a darker tone, which was what I wanted to achieve by variation and keeping the listener interested and ofcourse surprised. Everything I do is done on purpose, I don't work by random processes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted June 16, 2008 Share Posted June 16, 2008 Okay, random was the wrong word :) What I meant was, that it sounded a bit as if you rushed the melody or just recorded something really quickly without reconsidering what you had played. I'm sorry if it sounds a bit harsh, because I can assure you that I don't intend on sounding like a bitch, hehe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dale Posted June 16, 2008 Author Share Posted June 16, 2008 Nah it's cool I don't think you're bitching. I respond to any comments whether positive or negative. This track took a while to produce > purely because I kept leaving it alone and then coming back to it on and off for roughly 5 months.. I didn't ever seem too sure about it at the beginning but now I really like the final piece. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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