Guest Alex0112 Posted August 11, 2008 Share Posted August 11, 2008 So after years of working on music, I think my work has finally yielded a few tunes that could possibly be finished. Being such a perfectionist, I can never accurately judge my music, and figured this would be a good place to get some criticism, as opposed to just showing friends and getting the whole "ah thats tight man" shit. But anyway, I'm attaching three songs. The last one I still think I can add on to. Also, all three I think could potentially benefit from better mixing, but here goes: Thanks for the feedback ahead of time! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Alex0112 Posted August 11, 2008 Share Posted August 11, 2008 By the way, I almost never title my songs, except for that first one "welting the max," so if anyone has ideas for song titles- throw em out there! EDIT: Guess I can't go over the 20mb limit even in a different post or thread? fuck... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amen Warrior Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 Hi. I liked the first one - specifically because it wasn't overproduced, it was really relaxing, however by the end i was hoping for some sort of variation in the percussion. Still good though. I loved the second one, it's going straight in my music-from-watmm folder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Alex0112 Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 Hi. I liked the first one - specifically because it wasn't overproduced, it was really relaxing, however by the end i was hoping for some sort of variation in the percussion. Still good though. I loved the second one, it's going straight in my music-from-watmm folder Thanks a ton, glad you liked it! and again, these songs arent necessarily done, so I think I will go back and add some more variation in the first one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
perunamuusi Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 its nice. i like the beat in welting the max. maybe add some realtime modulation to the bleepy synths rather than vary up the drums as someone else said. i like its relentlessness. 2nd one is very nice too. maybe drums could be a bit louder though i quite like how the synth mids and highs are quite overpowering. hypnotic i like Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tht! tne Posted August 15, 2008 Share Posted August 15, 2008 weltingthemax 2ii: i like the sound in the snare's place. i think the fadeout at the end is too long. jamii: takes a long time to get going imo. it is kind of aimlessly pretty but didn't satisfy my need for substance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest A/D Posted August 16, 2008 Share Posted August 16, 2008 i like jamII - nice textures and chords - but it does feel like a jam in that it lacks structure. could be way more effective with some more defined form, adding/subtracting layers, changing up the flow, etc. thanks for posting! post more when you can [: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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