track: "understand"

[Guest Demerzel]

 

 

Attached track is unfinished and the parts are brutally needing rehearsal. Hence, ignore the arse notes during the improvised runs near the end and the fact I ended the piano before finishing the chord progression...

 

But I need some opinions on how it's sounding so far? Is the lead sound appropriate? Are all the sections fitting together well? (I know the melodies aren't particularly just now but I'm working on that.)

 

I plan to add a bit more in the way of background ambience to this track. Other than the piano runs that echo very quietly in the background, just general noise to add to the feel of the track.

 

As for percussion, what way to go with that?

 

Cheers in advance.

[brian trageskin]

where is chuck norris when we need him??

that track is nice! the intro is too long imo

[Guest Demerzel]

See, I have a lot of buildup I want to do, do you think it would be fine that length, maybe even longer, providing that some melodies and layers camein earlier?

[Guest IRARI]

sounds good, could be longer

i didn't have any problem sticking with this one over the 3:16 length

it was consistently interesting and built well

why not try some glitchy percussion

[Guest Demerzel]

Cheers.

 

Attached: Newer draft. No drums yet, main melody not yet played in but I pretty much hear it in my head. Better, worse, more opinions?

[Salvatorin]

This is one of the nicest things you've done so far actually.

[Guest Demerzel]

Thanks.

[Squee]

You should rerecord this with a real piano and get some real string-samples, because that would do SOOOO much to the feel and depth of this tune. MIDI must die.

I'm not that keen on the delay effect on the piano. Turn up the feedback a bit more so after a couple of minutes the piano starts swimming around in its own delay - plus that would work as part of the ambience you're looking for.