Guest wasps Posted February 5, 2006 Share Posted February 5, 2006 hello, any feedback on this Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag here tune would be well appreciated. it's a remix attempt of this competition, and is my first proper tune using the new studio stuff. i'm not sure if it's just a bit wanky... advanks tanks. [w] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest wasps Posted February 6, 2006 Share Posted February 6, 2006 the now-finished version is Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag here. any comments would be really helpful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Promo Posted February 6, 2006 Share Posted February 6, 2006 Nice I like this. Don't know if I was totally keen on those strings they seem to jar a little and take the edge off the funky vibes I'm finding. Something needs to be done with the rimshot sounds as it sounds a bit sharp with just that slight reverb on it. However I do like the rimshot sound itself but it just needs some softening to take the sharpness off it. The way it developed was very nice. Overall digging the vibe of this tune. I wish I could create something in this vein. Nice keys and overall nice vibe. Good job. Don't know whether its on a par with Luke Vilbert goodness yet but I like your style. It just seems for me to be lacking something to just to take it to another level. Overall I likes though and I likes what you're doing. You got some abilities Wasps! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest wasps Posted February 6, 2006 Share Posted February 6, 2006 Nice I like this. Don't know if I was totally keen on those strings they seem to jar a little and take the edge off the funky vibes I'm finding. Something needs to be done with the rimshot sounds as it sounds a bit sharp with just that slight reverb on it. However I do like the rimshot sound itself but it just needs some softening to take the sharpness off it. The way it developed was very nice. Overall digging the vibe of this tune. I wish I could create something in this vein. Nice keys and overall nice vibe. Good job. Don't know whether its on a par with Luke Vilbert goodness yet but I like your style. It just seems for me to be lacking something to just to take it to another level. Overall I likes though and I likes what you're doing. You got some abilities Wasps! wicked, thanks alot - some good comments there, for sure. i'll take another listen to the break - for some reason, the rimshot has been problematic from the beginning, regarding the levels. it's almost certainly eqing, so i'll check it out again. i think i just need some time off from it so i can hear all those things i'm missing now. the strings and the vocal snippets are essentially the only thing of the original track, so they can't really drop them. i also know what you mean about the next level thing - absolutely. but i'm just beginning with it all and it's unknown territory, so hopefully i learn about those things in good time. :) thanks promo, very much appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest grasshoppa Posted February 14, 2006 Share Posted February 14, 2006 a very nice layed backness to it, nice sounds. development was strong and liked where it led good seperation good jobo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest feta lol Posted February 14, 2006 Share Posted February 14, 2006 it's a yay from me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephyr_Nova Posted February 14, 2006 Share Posted February 14, 2006 Very well done. Ten times better than the original --sooo tacky! You managed to make it sound really good. Good enough for me to want to check out the artist that made the original (who made me shudder, hehe). Very smooth mix and arrangement, tasteful sounds. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest timc3 Posted February 14, 2006 Share Posted February 14, 2006 Just listening as I type this - and I really ought to listen to it on my monitors. Really like the laid back ambience to it, but when it changes half way through this is when it really gels for me. Best use of piano I have heard for a while! Not so in to the way it stops sounds like you just gave up a bit. Really nice though. OffTopic, but, where in Norway are you based? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest androne Posted February 14, 2006 Share Posted February 14, 2006 I enjoyed it, didnt hear the original so im not sure what to comment on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest wasps Posted February 14, 2006 Share Posted February 14, 2006 fark - nowt for ages then loadsa comments. => androne - neither did i. .) => timc3 - thanks man. i'm not a fan of long songs - i get bored really quickly - so it has to be kept succinct with as little repetition as possible. which may go some way to explain the fast switches... seems that most peeps liked the klakky salsa riddum more that the first. .) based in ålesund, btw. => Zephyr_Nova, feta, grassoppaa - cheers guys, encouraging words. unfortunately not able to touch it now as having *cough* problems with live... .( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dorian concept Posted February 15, 2006 Share Posted February 15, 2006 found this one on the ntune forum, ., sure do like your funkay reggaed out spiritual 69-73era approach, .. I myself still have tou work on my remx ... keep on keepin on wasps, .. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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