erichodge Posted November 21, 2008 Share Posted November 21, 2008 hey all, here is a beat driven ambient electronic music track... and i keep getting lost in the FX and am maybe losing sight of the overall song structure. if you could listen and let me know what sections work and what sections don't it would be much appreciated. cheers. dd1l.mp3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beneboi Posted November 22, 2008 Share Posted November 22, 2008 the drums dont work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
erichodge Posted November 22, 2008 Author Share Posted November 22, 2008 the drums dont work cause the drums don't work they just make it worse so i'll, have to write the song again hmm... i think the drums don't work so well in the beginning, but get better towards the end. i am willing to be wrong though... did you listen all the way through? as always, thanks for your feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beneboi Posted November 22, 2008 Share Posted November 22, 2008 yea, i didnt listen all the way through i kind of skipped around, i did like the atmosphere, but for me the drums are lacking rhythm and independence, they dont make me want to continue listening Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
erichodge Posted November 22, 2008 Author Share Posted November 22, 2008 yea, i didnt listen all the way through i kind of skipped around, i did like the atmosphere, but for me the drums are lacking rhythm and independence, they dont make me want to continue listening ok, understood. going to work more on the drums a bit. could you do me a favor, if you have the time, and listen to that last 50 seconds and let me know if the drums are still bad there? is it the kit, or the beat itself? thanks beneboi... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beneboi Posted November 22, 2008 Share Posted November 22, 2008 well, i suppose they work fine, but they seem rather thin, perhaps find a boomier kick and you might try compressing them just a bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
erichodge Posted November 22, 2008 Author Share Posted November 22, 2008 well, i suppose they work fine, but they seem rather thin, perhaps find a boomier kick and you might try compressing them just a bit onnit. i've been bad about reviewing lately... but i will check through older posts and be sure to find your latest stuff... thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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