Guest Basma Posted February 14, 2009 Share Posted February 14, 2009 This is the new track I'm trying to work on, any advice? What could be changed/added.. I_got_it.mp3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted February 14, 2009 Share Posted February 14, 2009 Writing this as I'm listening to it: The vocal could definitely need a boost and the same goes for synths, because they drown in the amen break... okay, it gets better around 2:00. Okay, here's the deal... It sounds great, and I like the beat, synths, and Massive Attack-like vocal, but you need to work on the build up and work on some breaks, because nothing really happens. Also, since you're using the amen break you could without doubt get some fun out of fucking around with the beat and create some unexpected twists and turns which would suddenly make the tune a lot more exciting for the listener. Also, you should make the synths explode at one point nearing the end. Make them really gritty and nasty :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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