thehauntingsoul Posted August 29, 2009 Share Posted August 29, 2009 I've been working on this one off and on for a while now. Its in its final stages structure wise. I'll probably do a revision or two before I call it the final product but its pretty much finished. Any feedback is awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thehauntingsoul Posted August 30, 2009 Author Share Posted August 30, 2009 bump. if you dont like the beginning enough to listen all the way at least skip to 3:20 which is where the wind up finally stops and the track sorta peaks out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneaksta303 Posted August 31, 2009 Share Posted August 31, 2009 not bad, not great. The intro is meh as fuck. I dunno. It's not bad, but a little preset sounding. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vamos scorcho Posted August 31, 2009 Share Posted August 31, 2009 i like what goes on in the second half. it would be better if there was constantly something engaging like those synths in the second half happening throughout the song Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest bigs Posted August 31, 2009 Share Posted August 31, 2009 i certainly didn't dislike it but it never really grabbed my attention. i'd recommend having your beat evolve somewhere, as the main drum beat remained static for the duration of the song. a song like this would do well if it were much shorter, otherwise i'd add some excitement! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thehauntingsoul Posted August 31, 2009 Author Share Posted August 31, 2009 cool, well thx for the input there fellahs. I think I will modify this track so that the intro doesnt go so slowly, and things get a little better a little quicker. also yeah I'm going to meticulously go in and make the beat switch up and evolve here and there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest theSun Posted September 3, 2009 Share Posted September 3, 2009 i like the 8bit sound and the drum syncopation but yeah the intro needs to get right into it. could be pretty sweet though with some tweaks in arrangment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chim Posted September 3, 2009 Share Posted September 3, 2009 boring and preset-y pretty much. step it up man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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