Guest Jimbob Posted October 18, 2009 Share Posted October 18, 2009 http://soundcloud.com/earl-grey/unfinished-drumfunk-tune www.myspace.com/earlgreyjungle Not really posted any tunes in here for a long while now, but looking for some advice on this track i'm having some difficulty with. Got 3 minutes in and not really sure where to take it, bit of a writers block i suppose, as if i've hit a wall and unsure of how to navigate it.... Any recommendations, likes or dislikes, things it might need and other things it can do without, all will be considered and more than appreciated also, how do you post Soundcloud players here? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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thief Posted October 22, 2009 Share Posted October 22, 2009 add in a new break after the vocal with more edits? (like in life without drums @ 5:00) or stay with the break thats already there and change it up a bit (like in ) anyway im surprised to read that you're not sure where to go with it, sounds to me like you knew where it was going. i really like it so far, gj Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Erothyme Posted October 22, 2009 Share Posted October 22, 2009 I do enjoy the groove. I would like to hear this completed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Jimbob Posted October 22, 2009 Share Posted October 22, 2009 nice one dudes, hopefully i can finish this before Christmas @ Thief: haven't heard of John Atterbury, will have to have a look at Outsider Records, there looks some good stuff on there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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