New track.

[Guest Adam]

So... This is my new track. Give me some feedback please. Thank you.

 

http://soundcloud.com/adambeker/garrry

[Guest yanG]

like the intro, find the beat terrible, the bass sounds overcompressed, in an ugly way. the transition @ 1:35 could be better. i like the beat based moment, along with the melody that comes on top. then i don't really get the progression. @ 3:00 it's getting a bit too repetitive. love the synth that comes @ 3:20 but it's too shooooooooort! it was really bringing something, maybe it should come earlier and more progressively, it might loop well to the beat moment @ 1:39.

 

is the track finished?

what gear have you been using?

[Guest Adam]

Thanks for the feedback man. Do you find the beat terrible because it's just simple house beat or for other reasons? The sound which comes @3.20 is actually just a reversed delay of the intro. I doubt this track is finished but i don't think i'll ever touch it again.

 

You asked me once about gear. It's just fl studio with mostly free plugins and midi keyboard.

[candlestickmaker]

really good song, great job man. i'd just drop the dblue glitch stretch and reverse, that's all

[Guest Adam]

Thanks.

[Guest tht tne]

i like the part @ 1:40... feel like it takes to long to build and conclude and i'm with yan about the beat

[Guest sweater weather]

i like the bassline, maybe just need to change it up a bit