hokum Posted December 14, 2010 Author Posted December 14, 2010 thanks to you ... any harsh peaks or uncared for melody?
Guest mrx Posted December 14, 2010 Posted December 14, 2010 i like this. the sounds are nice, but the track overall sounds unfocused. To me it sounds like you had all these great different ideas and just jammed them in one track.
hokum Posted December 15, 2010 Author Posted December 15, 2010 To me it sounds like you had all these great different ideas and just jammed them in one track.... I smile and agree.... Thanks
Guest cult fiction Posted December 15, 2010 Posted December 15, 2010 I like parts of this a lot... the second portion that begins with the club chords is my favorite. If I would suggest any changes it would be to move that part out front and structure the song around it... I love tracks with a lot of different parts to them... my #1 complaint with most electronic music is that they only have 1 idea that they hammer on over and over again... dubstep is a prime offender. Don't surrender to repetition!
Guest yanG Posted December 15, 2010 Posted December 15, 2010 Cool stuff, reminds a lot of ilkae indeed. After reading the second comment I expected a lot of different moods and in the track but actually I found it a little repetitive, or maybe just too long. Or maybe I just didn't let it enough in. I like parts of this a lot... the second portion that begins with the club chords is my favorite. If I would suggest any changes it would be to move that part out front and structure the song around it... I love tracks with a lot of different parts to them... my #1 complaint with most electronic music is that they only have 1 idea that they hammer on over and over again... dubstep is a prime offender. Don't surrender to repetition! Man please check the forum for my tracks and tell me what you think, I just can't make a track with only 1 idea (I wish I could though).
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