a track

[Guest naos]

First track I did in months. needs feedback

Cheers!

 

http://soundcloud.com/nao_s/evoxian-1/s-e3Y0M

Edited December 21, 2010 by naos

[Guest tht tne]

i like it but i think it should be longer with more progression or the same length with more progression, it's kind of monochromatic... but it's good!

[Guest naos]

i like it but i think it should be longer with more progression or the same length with more progression, it's kind of monochromatic... but it's good!

 

well thanks!

Edited December 21, 2010 by naos

[BCM]

i also think it's good! could use some more progression as tht said, but it's still a good tune.

 

basically - what tht tne said.

[Guest naos]

i also think it's good! could use some more progression as tht said, but it's still a good tune.

 

basically - what tht tne said.

 

Thanks BCM and tht tne, your input is much appreciated! I've put myself under some sort of wierd artificial pressure to finish a track before christmass and as much as I'm happy with it, I understand that I could have been a bit longer and perhaps richer with textures.

[MildewOnRice]

pretty tight, mon.

reminds me a lot of Source Direct but cleaner..

[brian trageskin]

nice! reminds me of the good old times

[cruising for burgers]

i think it misses some groove, maybe try adding some more hi hats or cymbals

[Guest naos]

pretty tight, mon.

reminds me a lot of Source Direct but cleaner..

Thanks, actually, I was thinking of Source Direct while working on this, even though I haven't played their tunes in years. Will do that.

 

 

nice! reminds me of the good old times

 

Thank you Mr. Tregaskin!

 

 

i think it misses some groove, maybe try adding some more hi hats or cymbals

 

That's a good proposition. I want to do something with it. The basses are actually to deep

to notice most of the time. I guess some cymbals+higher bass tones might help.