Realization

[sergeantk]

http://soundcloud.com/zanderone/realization

 

Just finished this after a few weeks of working on it. I am happy with it but id love to hear what you guys have to say. Any comments welcome.

[Hugh Mughnus]

http://soundcloud.com/zanderone/realization

 

Just finished this after a few weeks of working on it. I am happy with it but id love to hear what you guys have to say. Any comments welcome.

 

I'm liking it, it has a minimal, otherworldly feel to it for me... reminds me of being in an alien pharmacy picking out some sort of alien sleeping pills or something,

 

Good work, keep it up.

[Guest apeterlives]

is that synth you made or a sample? like how it sounds

[sergeantk]

http://soundcloud.com/zanderone/realization

 

Just finished this after a few weeks of working on it. I am happy with it but id love to hear what you guys have to say. Any comments welcome.

 

I'm liking it, it has a minimal, otherworldly feel to it for me... reminds me of being in an alien pharmacy picking out some sort of alien sleeping pills or something,

 

Good work, keep it up.

Thank you. That was pretty much the sound I was going for... besides the alien pharmacy bit, but i quite like that image.

is that synth you made or a sample? like how it sounds

Made it, I never use samples for synths.

[Cryptowen]

bomberman grade tune right thar

[Guest Promo]

The chords are instantly appealing, very nice with quite a detroity vibe going on. My main crit would be that all just hits you like wham without enough build up and tension but the notes and arrangement is nevertheless good. Mm not sure about 2.20 onwards sounds like a key change which doesn't sit to well to my ears. Yeah the flow is lost for me at 2.20. I'd say its about 75% there and in itself is pleasant to ear but I think there are ways you could definitely improve upon it.

 

Reminds me of Claude Young's 'Impolite to Refuse'.

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HBbpxesIAHs

[sergeantk]

bomberman grade tune right thar

 

Thanks man. I'm probably a little too influenced by 90s game music.

The chords are instantly appealing, very nice with quite a detroity vibe going on. My main crit would be that all just hits you like wham without enough build up and tension but the notes and arrangement is nevertheless good. Mm not sure about 2.20 onwards sounds like a key change which doesn't sit to well to my ears. Yeah the flow is lost for me at 2.20. I'd say its about 75% there and in itself is pleasant to ear but I think there are ways you could definitely improve upon it.

 

Reminds me of Claude Young's 'Impolite to Refuse'.

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HBbpxesIAHs

Thank you for the kind words.

 

I understand what you're saying, those were the two biggest uncertainties for me when I was arranging it... The buildup and the "transition section" so to speak. If you had anything in particular that would be an improvement to those aspects, I'd be totally open to hear them.

 

Also, nice tune... detroit techno is the shit, i probably wouldnt have even made this song without hours of Psyche blasting in my ears all day,

[Cryptowen]

bomberman grade tune right thar

Thanks man. I'm probably a little too influenced by 90s game music.

Nah that's just the highest ranking I give to chilled out space-mall sounding electronic instrumentals

[sergeantk]

bomberman grade tune right thar

Thanks man. I'm probably a little too influenced by 90s game music.

Nah that's just the highest ranking I give to chilled out space-mall sounding electronic instrumentals

[Guest nahuo]

I like this a lot. have heard it a cuple of times already and Im not feeling any lost momentum at 2:20. It sounds really good to me.