skotosa Posted September 12, 2012 Share Posted September 12, 2012 http://soundcloud.com/gerfeso/just-so-happened Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Friendly Foil Posted September 12, 2012 Share Posted September 12, 2012 the percussion in this one reminds me of Vsnares' huge chrome cylinder etc. album. Except this track actually has a groove for the listener to get into, which is nice. nice melody too actually. I don't know what else to say. it's quite good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dpek Posted September 12, 2012 Share Posted September 12, 2012 You have a type of percussion which could be easily variating all the time - not much but to keep things fresh. Otherwise this is koo' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Piotr Posted September 12, 2012 Share Posted September 12, 2012 You have a type of percussion which could be easily variating all the time - not much but to keep things fresh. Otherwise this is koo' This. Nice track overall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Frankie5fingers Posted September 12, 2012 Share Posted September 12, 2012 i agree, your percussion is simple enough to have slight variations here and there. it would really spice up this track. and like everyone esle says, the rest is fine. great song man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cryptowen Posted September 12, 2012 Share Posted September 12, 2012 Echoing others' sentiments about the percussion - really cool tones but they seem kind of asking for variation. The tune got interesting for me when you introduced those dissonant notes around the second half, first minute was a bit slow going & I would have liked to hear that second melodic instrument introduced earlier in some fashion but I'm pretty ADHD so you are mileage may vary Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ceqn Posted September 12, 2012 Share Posted September 12, 2012 I really enjoyed the synth and percussion of the song. I get the feeling that you were trying to work under certain limitations perhaps, which is good practice of course. Try broadening your frequency range and possibly add a few different sounds that could keep the listener engaged from start to finish. I particularly enjoyed the theme and feel of the song, but it does not seem to go anywhere. Try doing a few chord changes or add some harmonies. All in all, great work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skotosa Posted September 13, 2012 Author Share Posted September 13, 2012 Really appreciate the remarks. I called on the repetitive nature of it myself and had kept the song private for 2 weeks cause I thought I'd go back to it and add stuff but it just didn't happen(side tracked on other half finished songs). Glad you guys could still enjoy it all the same. I'll definitely try to aim for that next step and put a little more time and effort to give them that extra push. Thanks Dudes, George Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
747Music Posted September 13, 2012 Share Posted September 13, 2012 What can I say that hasn't already been said? So I'll just say: "Good song fella." and I'll leave it there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sergeantk Posted September 13, 2012 Share Posted September 13, 2012 really nice melodic progression... i feel like the whole song is building up to a climax that never happens though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
auxien Posted September 13, 2012 Share Posted September 13, 2012 this reminds me instantly of ICBYD-era Aphex. i like the intro and the end, but the middle just kind of ...is. not bad by any stretch. but as what most others said, there needs to be change, growth, something. the melody and beats are solid though, and the mix and production have a good clean sound to them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
encym Posted September 14, 2012 Share Posted September 14, 2012 Beautiful sounds, definitely worth building, expanding & climaxing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anonymstol Posted September 14, 2012 Share Posted September 14, 2012 god i'm so jealous! this is amazing! what i liked the most was the synths and the melodies. there's not much to criticize on this really. it's just... perfect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest yanG Posted September 14, 2012 Share Posted September 14, 2012 enjoying the first seconds... cool beats! i expect some variation now... new synth welcome but still i'm beginning to starve for more changes. evolution in the melody and drum sounds, still not enough for my taste. overall eventhough i liked the vibe it sounded more like a long buildup than a finished track to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest kyriakos Posted September 16, 2012 Share Posted September 16, 2012 nice crisp production. the synth melodies are pretty yet give off this creepy vibe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
randomAmateur Posted September 16, 2012 Share Posted September 16, 2012 I like it simple I'd suggest more echos/ deep backround sounds, but that's only a wild suggestion, I like it already as it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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