yan_g - unt074

[Guest yanG]

 

I have to work the transitions, and some parts are a bit boring, have to fix it, other than that it's got moments i'm pretty happy with...

[Guest Frankie5fingers]

this is really cool. but those drums got annoying after awhile. have them switch up every now and again. and you could even use them to do percussive transitions. i think that might help a lot.

[Lucas]

A really nice one ! My overall criticism would go towards the fact most of the parts come one after the other quite quickly and could in my opinion develop themselves better (note : I often have the same criticism about my own music). The transitions didn't sound bad to me, I like the fact they are pretty straight forward.

[Guest yanG]

this is really cool. but those drums got annoying after awhile. have them switch up every now and again. and you could even use them to do percussive transitions. i think that might help a lot.

 

A really nice one ! My overall criticism would go towards the fact most of the parts come one after the other quite quickly and could in my opinion develop themselves better (note : I often have the same criticism about my own music). The transitions didn't sound bad to me, I like the fact they are pretty straight forward.

 

Thanks both for your criticism, I've updated the file, follwing some of your advice. I still need to give the drums some more variation, and I've come up with another part I have to develop and make transitions for :/