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My crappy Analord ripoff


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Does anybody here use the Pocketband Android app? Well here's my 'Pissed up in SE1' ripoff. I like it from a viewpoint that I actually made it and it was the first one I ever finished but from a production point of view, I can tell it's not good. You guys will probably tear it apart. Don't hold back!

https://soundcloud.com/eoghan-keegan/wwwworking

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How is it a rip-off? It sounds nothing like it.

It could use a few more levels of detail, but it's a good starting point. I'd change up the drums a little at times, add some more synth parts, and intersperse a few new sections to keep it from getting too predictable.

 

The new loop at 2:14 is bad... way too repetitive. It kills the vibe you had going.

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How is it a rip-off? It sounds nothing like it.

 

It could use a few more levels of detail, but it's a good starting point. I'd change up the drums a little at times, add some more synth parts, and intersperse a few new sections to keep it from getting too predictable.

 

The new loop at 2:14 is bad... way too repetitive. It kills the vibe you had going.

 

 

well he did say that it was crappy.

 

Also, the track should have started at 01:46 gone for a few intro bars, then you should have put 0:51 in there. Everything else should be thrown out. And then you should work on your drum groove and sounds, and have a harmony drop in over the bass, which should be changing around a little more. In brief, follow my first two sentences.

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I agree with delet, you need a stronger start, and switching those bits around would help as the part at 1:51 is catchier than your current beginning. It sounds more like one of those songs you'd hear on those PC games from the early 90s, like Ultima and whatnot than Analord.

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Wasn't particular keen on this. Agree with others that it doesn't sound much like Analord until say the second half. I just don't get why people wanna sound like Analord anyways. Sorry dude. :-)

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