QQQ Posted October 27, 2015 Share Posted October 27, 2015 https://soundcloud.com/user645104563/lookfar Any feedback or critique would be appreciated. Edit: minor adjustments made. Reuploaded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gritbox Posted October 29, 2015 Share Posted October 29, 2015 i really really like the synth youve got there, the sound and the chord progressions. I also like the rolling sample loop thing that comes in early on too. To me there is a bit of lo-fi ish sound going on with the synth and the drums sound too clean and small. The hats need a little bit of variation in volume to make them feel less robotic. Something that might work is attaching the velocity to the volume, and to the envelope with very small scaling so it adjusts the attack and decay a bit. The kick and snare could be squashed with a compressor, and have the high end rolled off a bit. Another option would be finding some kick/snare samples in breaks. I think its a good song overall, its good a nice synth sound and the drum patterns are interesting, but the drum samples are just a little too clean i think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Chesney Posted October 29, 2015 Share Posted October 29, 2015 I'd agree with that. Drums are a bit flat but can easily be made good. It's lovely as it is to be honest but on a personal preference the drums need more dynamics. Nice stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
granty Posted October 30, 2015 Share Posted October 30, 2015 Like this, nice synths sounds and the reversed loop sounds good. I reckon a bit of room reverb would sound good here, give it a nice bit of space. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QQQ Posted October 30, 2015 Author Share Posted October 30, 2015 Thanks guys, I really appreciate the feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hardwired Posted October 31, 2015 Share Posted October 31, 2015 I have to agree with the above, for me I'd like some more distortion on the drums. The synths are beautiful, cant fault em. Fantastic track. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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