3 very different tracks

[Guest gron]

I put some tracks up on garageband.com experimental electronica... but nobody there has any constructive advice for improvements. Maybe I can get that here?

Choose one and say something! :) Please

 

1. heavy breaks and stuff:

http://www.garageband.com/mp3/trout-k.mp3?...M0LdsaSlYVm2Yms

 

 

 

2. unsettling ambient:

http://www.garageband.com/mp3/trout-18th_d...M0LdsaSlYlG-YGE

 

 

 

3. soft & flowing:

http://www.garageband.com/mp3/trout-orange...M0LdsaSlYlGwamg

[Bubba69]

That first one is great. At least I think, but Im in a wierd mood. second one is good I think. I think the third one is good too but Im still listening to the second. I like your sytle of building things up, reminds me of vibert in a way. Really dreamy. Sometimes the reverb is toooo much but I always say that and this music is mixed in a way that I dont really care about the reverb so much. Your definarely goood and I like this. So keep posting. Actually that may be what ruins you, run away and develope your talent in ISOLATION!!(lol, sorry). Maybe the melodies are too static and minimalistic. But the stereo spread is mindblowing. That last song could be amazing with some really odd shifts in key.

[Guest gron]

thanks for the feedback :)

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1 bump

Edited June 11, 2006 by gron

[Guest yann]

1st one is great, there is nothing it lacks of for me :)

 

not too fan of the second one although it has some pretty interesting moments

 

orange lights : like it a lot. 1:20 great, and the voice @ 1:27 is great too, nice atmosphere, not too busy but yet full. i'm saving those on drive. don't like the voice @ 1:54 but that's just me i guess. not as interestting as in the beginning from 3:00 to the end... maybe try some changes, make the chime chords of the end come sooner and develop from that? (that's what i'd like to hear )

 

we have more & more good musicians on here :) thanks for posting!

[aciddon]

Liked them all, 'Orange lights' is very imaginative and I loved what you did to that voice synth sample, sounds very quirky abit like global goon, its got that charm to it.