Wet

[Real Human Bean]

My thread seems to've disappeared, here's a nearly done track. How's it sounding out there?

https://instaud.io/3JMD

[dingformung]

super fat and sausagy sounding, good jobbo

[T3551ER]

So nice to hear some in progress/current stuff m8! Unsurprisingly, the sounds here are top notch, as is the composition (and general emotive elements of the track). There is also a unique voice here - influences are felt, but it's more like using a very wide palette to paint a unique (and lovely) portrait. Some quick notes (will give this a proper listen on good headphones later - listening through earbuds atm)

First "section" of the song pretty much wouldn't change a thing. Such a tight balance of the various sounds, particularly love the watery bits (slightly Orbital In Sides in the best way possible). Like that some of the sounds are a little bent/off-tuned slightly. 

Around 2:10 or so, when things drop out def love the hanging melodies, but things feel a little. . . thin maybe? Might consider adding some verb or even a really warm pad (but I'm also totally concerned that it's these shit earbuds) 

Dat drop aroudn 2:43. . mmm, love it. .. .Aphex-ish but not, like, a ripoff. Def your own thing. Instant head nod. Bass sounds thin but FFS earbuds you are the worst. 

The only thing I'd recommend considering is trimming the ending a little bit (last minute) - up until this point, feels like there is a steady stream of evolving musical ideas and motifs, the last minute seems to meander a bit (just my OP). 

 

Edited May 28, 2019 by T3551ER

[Real Human Bean]

Thanks you gents for listening and thanks for the very helpful critique. Taken onboard and implementing.

[Plarkreluke Banloboh]

Nice swing feel, definitely like the way the plucked melody sort of speeds up and mimics the drum fill at the end of each 2 bar passage. Lot’s of delicate, wet, hi-fi details in the soft refrains that reward re-listening. That acid bass-line is really groovy the way it slides and it blends well with the gradual build up of bubbly textures.