BaggerMcGuirk 156 Posted March 27 Share Posted March 27 The aquatic sounds at the beginning are really nice. Yea I'd also like to see what this sounds like as more than a sketch. 1 Link to post Share on other sites
mngosx 78 Posted March 31 Author Share Posted March 31 filled the track out quite a bit; also added a secondary section at the end. mixing needs some work and it needs polish, but overall I'm very happy with it so far! fullersketch.mp3 1 Link to post Share on other sites
ArtificialDisco 68 Posted March 31 Share Posted March 31 7 hours ago, mngosx said: filled the track out quite a bit; also added a secondary section at the end. mixing needs some work and it needs polish, but overall I'm very happy with it so far! fullersketch.mp3 5.64 MB · 2 downloads Yeah, this is definitely getting exciting. I think with a couple of careful decisions you could bring it home. I'd like to hear more of the main melody that starts at 0:47... Actually I can hear it played with a different sound after 2:00, so possibly you just need to turn that up in the mix. Also, maybe that second section at 1:55 could build up slower. I.e. it would be cool after all the madness of the first section if it stayed chill for a bit. I think you could mull around for an extra half minute before bringing in the lasers, at least. 1 Link to post Share on other sites
mngosx 78 Posted April 4 Author Share Posted April 4 new WIP, might finish alongside the other track for the EP coolwip.mp3 1 Link to post Share on other sites
eassae 495 Posted April 5 Share Posted April 5 13 hours ago, mngosx said: new WIP, might finish alongside the other track for the EP coolwip.mp3 2.28 MB · 1 download Love that deeeeep sub. Makes me feel warm and fuzzy. 1 Link to post Share on other sites
mngosx 78 Posted April 5 Author Share Posted April 5 (edited) further realized version Edited April 6 by mngosx fixed mixing+perc, added soundcloud link 2 Link to post Share on other sites
ArtificialDisco 68 Posted April 6 Share Posted April 6 1 hour ago, mngosx said: further realized version decent1.mp3 5.35 MB · 0 downloads Love it. I listened to the first one too and I think you're definitely taking this in the right direction. The groove is really cool and mellow and this is one of those tunes I really just wish for it to keep going without too much change. The melody at around 1:50 fits nicely as well. It'll sit well with the other track you're working on. In terms of mixing it could probably do with some EQ, I feel like the bass is getting in the way of the other instruments. At least take a look at that humming bass sound. The boom is great though. 1 Link to post Share on other sites
mngosx 78 Posted April 6 Author Share Posted April 6 20 minutes ago, ArtificialDisco said: Love it. I listened to the first one too and I think you're definitely taking this in the right direction. The groove is really cool and mellow and this is one of those tunes I really just wish for it to keep going without too much change. The melody at around 1:50 fits nicely as well. It'll sit well with the other track you're working on. In terms of mixing it could probably do with some EQ, I feel like the bass is getting in the way of the other instruments. At least take a look at that humming bass sound. The boom is great though. made the bass a little less crazy in the new mix; I definitely agree. I appreciate the feedback! 1 Link to post Share on other sites
BaggerMcGuirk 156 Posted April 6 Share Posted April 6 This has a really thick groove, and it offsets the glassy pad really well. I think I'm listening to the newer version, as the bass seems pretty under control. 1 Link to post Share on other sites
mngosx 78 Posted April 8 Author Share Posted April 8 final version of crystal veil 2 Link to post Share on other sites
mngosx 78 Posted Friday at 04:46 PM Author Share Posted Friday at 04:46 PM short little wip that'll definitely become something more at some point prophet.mp3 1 Link to post Share on other sites
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