Mozex Posted October 9, 2019 Share Posted October 9, 2019 Been busy with it for hours, experimenting with sequencer and delay... I hope this one has a bit more variation. Please listen to it and tell me if it is a bit better then previous songs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brian trageskin Posted October 9, 2019 Share Posted October 9, 2019 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mozex Posted October 9, 2019 Author Share Posted October 9, 2019 @brian trageskin ok? Can you please tell me if this song is a bit better then previous ones? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CEP2plet Posted October 9, 2019 Share Posted October 9, 2019 Good production quality. Let's start with 0:25 into the piece: You introduce a synth line and some drum-hit patterns all at the same time. You have a promising bass-and-synth harmony going on, but it still feels rushed. Since it sounds like it is going somewhere, and you do not go anywhere else theme-wise with this piece, go slower into its build-up. That would give the piece greater impact. As to how this piece compares with prior pieces, I would repeat what I wrote before this comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mozex Posted October 9, 2019 Author Share Posted October 9, 2019 llol rushed, I spent three hours on this shit lol. I had hoped it was better, I did not copy past everything, I played a lot variation in bass and pads, but I guess it does not matter in the end... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CEP2plet Posted October 9, 2019 Share Posted October 9, 2019 Let's be fair: I used an American English expression. Sometimes, people will say something sounds rushed. They are describing the sound itself, not how the sound was made. I did not mean that you rushed in its production. I meant that the way the track plays out had a certain effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
auxien Posted October 9, 2019 Share Posted October 9, 2019 it's definitely more interesting than anything i heard on that escape the loops album. keep experimenting moz. doesn't matter if any of us think it's better really, it's what you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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