sine nomine Posted October 29, 2019 Share Posted October 29, 2019 hi all, focusing on making short tracks, not up to mixing these yet, very rough and aiming for one track a week. just tired of not having any output and deleting everything. so here's the first one. any feedback would be much appreciated. all the best, to all. cheers, sine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mirror Posted October 29, 2019 Share Posted October 29, 2019 hey sine, this is really good! all the elements on the track fit well in my opinion, the melody and the overall build up keeps me interested throughout. the only thing that i would change is the snare sound that starts at 0:59, it's a bit dry and it stands out more than it should imo. also maybe try to slowly change the sound of the melody synth from the 2nd half onwards? smth as simple as increasing the resonance, the release, or playing around with the delay effect could elevate the song even more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sine nomine Posted October 29, 2019 Author Share Posted October 29, 2019 5 hours ago, mirror said: hey sine, this is really good! all the elements on the track fit well in my opinion, the melody and the overall build up keeps me interested throughout. the only thing that i would change is the snare sound that starts at 0:59, it's a bit dry and it stands out more than it should imo. also maybe try to slowly change the sound of the melody synth from the 2nd half onwards? smth as simple as increasing the resonance, the release, or playing around with the delay effect could elevate the song even more. thanks for your time in giving me some ideas mate, really appreciate it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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sine nomine Posted November 16, 2019 Author Share Posted November 16, 2019 this is the third version of Untitled. what do you all reckon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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