Guest Joence Posted April 18, 2008 Share Posted April 18, 2008 Just finished another drum&bass track. I think it's turned out well but I know a lot of the people on watmm know more about drum&bass than me - feel free to listen if you want and if you like it, or can hear problems with it please let me know ^_^ It's called The Valley and can be heard at http://www.myspace.com/joeyewen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Needlenose Posted April 19, 2008 Share Posted April 19, 2008 it's a bit repetitive and the samples are kind of annoying. the drums are pretty good. "liontamer" is a pretty good tune Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Joence Posted April 19, 2008 Share Posted April 19, 2008 it's a bit repetitive and the samples are kind of annoying. the drums are pretty good. "liontamer" is a pretty good tune Thanks for the feedback. Would you mind telling me which samples are annoying so I can edit/remove them? Only if you've got time, of course... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Needlenose Posted April 19, 2008 Share Posted April 19, 2008 it's a bit repetitive and the samples are kind of annoying. the drums are pretty good. "liontamer" is a pretty good tune Thanks for the feedback. Would you mind telling me which samples are annoying so I can edit/remove them? Only if you've got time, of course... joence.wav Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Joence Posted April 19, 2008 Share Posted April 19, 2008 it's a bit repetitive and the samples are kind of annoying. the drums are pretty good. "liontamer" is a pretty good tune Thanks for the feedback. Would you mind telling me which samples are annoying so I can edit/remove them? Only if you've got time, of course... Ah my brother didn't like that sample either - thanks a lot for the advice, I'll remove that sample and work on the track a bit more when I've got time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tht! tne Posted April 19, 2008 Share Posted April 19, 2008 i wasn't really feeling this one but i still think it's great that you're making such technically proficient music at 17 keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Joence Posted April 22, 2008 Share Posted April 22, 2008 i wasn't really feeling this one but i still think it's great that you're making such technically proficient music at 17 keep it up Thanks for your honest opinion (as always ) I've changed the main section of the track quite a lot - if anyone wants to listen again to hear the difference, the new version is on my myspace now :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest jamesy boy! Posted April 25, 2008 Share Posted April 25, 2008 the snare that comes in after the drop sounds like it needs tightening up a bit, sounds like its gota wee tiny delay on it im guessing uve layered 2 snares 2gether? nice atmosphere but the first drop lacks something and the track sounds like it never gets as rolling as it should. If it's meant to be like that sorry that's just my personal preferance :D nice work keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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