Guest cuubjan Posted June 29, 2008 Share Posted June 29, 2008 I've been on and off this for the past couple months..not sure about it. I don't think its a final yet either. into_a_road.mp3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest yanG Posted June 30, 2008 Share Posted June 30, 2008 i like the part with the sorta strings @ 1:57 gives some more intensity, like something's gonna happen... maybe. i think you should add some things, melodic synths, faster or heavier beats, the mood is nice but it doesn't really go anywhere, it just lacks intensity towards the end if you ask me. a sort of progression would be nice. well that's what i would do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tht! tne Posted June 30, 2008 Share Posted June 30, 2008 i really like this but i think it builds too quickly if you padded it out (with good ideas) it would have a more comfortable pace also i'm not sure about some of the choices you made on the percussion that cuica sound and either a tape stop or reverser effect you used in there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest cuubjan Posted July 1, 2008 Share Posted July 1, 2008 Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, I agree with both of your comments, they help! Ill get to reworking this more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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