erichodge Posted July 9, 2008 Share Posted July 9, 2008 it has its moments... let me know your thoughts. cheers, eric Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tht! tne Posted July 9, 2008 Share Posted July 9, 2008 i think this was a bit too noodly for me you'll laugh but i wished it had a hook Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest skullfunked Posted July 10, 2008 Share Posted July 10, 2008 I liked the all of the elements of this, but to me it lacked structure, I got a bit lost listening to it, in some parts the drums sounded a little random. I'm not sure how deliberate that is, as you've said its definately noodley. Although only listening on headphones (hd25s) it sounded quite well mixed down. with a bit more structure & progression, and something distinctive (a more recognisable/memorable riff or drum pattern) I think this could be a really nice track :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
erichodge Posted July 10, 2008 Author Share Posted July 10, 2008 your thoughts echo mine... the song definitely lacks structure. any particular portions of it that could/should be removed, or portions that could be repeated to add more structure? i got lost in building too many sounds for this one and didn't really think much about structure. the drum pattern has 3 major changes... but after the fact i went in and edited each bar so that there is not 1 pattern (apart from a couple of places) that repeats the same pattern. may have been overkill. thanks much, both of your, for the listens and feedback. cheers, eric Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest yanG Posted July 14, 2008 Share Posted July 14, 2008 liked it, drums didn't sound random to me, liked the sounds and overall production. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest the televisor Posted July 15, 2008 Share Posted July 15, 2008 i liked the melodies and synth sounds i think you shoulda used more electronic drums instead of acoustic though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
erichodge Posted July 18, 2008 Author Share Posted July 18, 2008 thanks all, for the listens and the feedback. have to give some of the recent posts a listen... been busy as heck lately with a move a loads of real person work. yan_g, i've got your demo downloaded and am definitely going to give that a listen. cheers all. -eric Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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