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not really a fan of the hard techno style, but i've got a few comments.

 

in the beginning the drums are too fuzzy (bitcrushed?). it doesn't really work, but then you fix them at around 0:23 -- it should be like this the whole time.

 

the riff that comes fully in around 0:20 is pretty boring and sticks around too long. the twiddling is nice, but not enough! basically i think 0:25 - 1:10 should be like condensed to something half the length - going through the same effects, but hanging on them less.

 

the transition at 1:10 is fucking sweet, as is pretty much everything from then on!

 

 

i could definitely imagine some high pitched screamy leads coming on and playing some frantic melodies at various points after 1:10, though it's your beast to tame, not mine!

 

once it gets going, this is good shit!

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in case it wasn't clear -- this was a live jam.

 

in the beginning the drums are too fuzzy (bitcrushed?). it doesn't really work, but then you fix them at around 0:23 -- it should be like this the whole time.

 

i thought those drums made the beat at 0:23 sound better... otherwise i would have just cut it off (i did cut off a bit before it opens, just me checking levels really).

 

the riff that comes fully in around 0:20 is pretty boring and sticks around too long. the twiddling is nice, but not enough! basically i think 0:25 - 1:10 should be like condensed to something half the length - going through the same effects, but hanging on them less.

 

agree with you 100% -- i got bogged down with my ms2000 and lost the groove. after floundering around a bit i got frustrated and slammed open the delay feedback. that seemed to get things back on track

 

the transition at 1:10 is fucking sweet, as is pretty much everything from then on!

 

i could definitely imagine some high pitched screamy leads coming on and playing some frantic melodies at various points after 1:10, though it's your beast to tame, not mine!

 

once it gets going, this is good shit!

 

thanks!

 

this track was a first jam after rearranging my studio. wasn't using much of my gear -- if i'd had more of it switched on, i probably would have gotten into it past 1:10 :wink:

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don't really like this kind of ountz ountz percussion unless its over supremely amazingly beautiful melodies that make me feel like I'm getting head from a victoria secret model. the excessive flanger? effects kind sound cool but incredibly random and dont help the track at all in my opinion. I dunno, im definitely not the person to talk to about this style of electronic. didnt really enjoy at all to be honest but thats just me. give me your Adam a7's.. pleeeeeez?

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also i should add my net return on this music shit is like -$15k at this point and i fully expect most people to keep shitting on it.

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