Guest jenny Posted July 7, 2011 Share Posted July 7, 2011 it's tonally simple. it's 4/4, but not completely straightforward. production-wise, it's kind of crap, it's just a sampler in reason with some reverb. i dunno, i wanted to write something down-key and not have to care about mixing, i'd be glad to hear what you think. http://soundcloud.com/sotis/mormor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest jenny Posted July 7, 2011 Share Posted July 7, 2011 low key, not down key. i don't know what the fuck down key means. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest jim Posted July 8, 2011 Share Posted July 8, 2011 It isn't really 4/4, even if that's the metre you used in reason, which is a good thing as it adds rhythmic interest. Too many root position triads and not quite enough melodic activity for my taste, kinda hovers around the G Maj/E Min area in a way which suggests you didn't quite know how to get out of it. Try respacing the chords and modulating a bit perhaps... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest jenny Posted July 8, 2011 Share Posted July 8, 2011 thanks for the criticism. i'll just have to look those music theoretical terms up on wikipedia first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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