unfinished awkward track needs feedback

[Guest Benedict Cumberbatch]

 

any feedback appreciated

[Guest boo]

mm liked it. guess more bits would be good.

[Guest yanG]

the waveform LOOKS awkward, playing now...

[Guest yanG]

it doesn't make sense to cut the synths only to put them back in just a coupla bars later, there should be a bigger change imo, or the track might go to some other place before going back to the original theme, dunno.

 

i like it lots when the melody comes @ about 1:40 or something, really like the mood of the track, and i usually dislike repetitive tracks but this one is seductively hypnotic :)

 

edit: by the way you should let us enjoy that bit for a longer time, once the final melody enters, and why not tweak some knobs or something to keep the track evolving.