Guest jenny Posted November 6, 2011 Share Posted November 6, 2011 http://soundcloud.com/sotis/sluzuzuz please give me your feedback. do you think it's too barebones? does its simplicity damage the piece? is it too bassy? etc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
atwork Posted November 9, 2011 Share Posted November 9, 2011 It's making me bounce. Excellent melodies and play with sounds. Doesn't sound all that bare-bones to me, but then even if it was, that's not a bad thing. Sorry for not being more critical. Maybe if a deconstructive beat break down (like at 0:40) came in again? Don't think it really needs it, but it might balance it out some. Nice effort! Sounds done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest jenny Posted November 11, 2011 Share Posted November 11, 2011 thanks mate! i guess it started out more simple and i didn't really think about stuff i added. there's a newer version now but i'm working on a few more tracks to go with it so i won't put that up just yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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