Noman23 Posted January 31, 2012 Share Posted January 31, 2012 Hi. I have made some music and I would love to know what you think. And if you like it, please spread it around. http://soundcloud.com/ingmar-noman/yeluv Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Promo Posted January 31, 2012 Share Posted January 31, 2012 First impression is the track is very long. Melodically it has that cutesy vibe going on which I must say I'm not a massive fan of but that's a personal thing and that's not to say its bad. My suggestion would be to add more layers or better still the addition of a chord sequence to kinda give the whole tune more resonance. I like what you did at around 4 mins with the synths maybe try and bring that in early on. I think the drums need to come to front a lot more as I found them a bit kinda quiet and lacking punch in the mix. I think try and get a bit more tension in there too. I think in essence shortening the track down to 3/4 mins would help. Oh and make sure you add chords that'll really give the track a lot more meat. Other than that yeah I can certainly hear the potential. Hope that helps. :-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noman23 Posted February 1, 2012 Author Share Posted February 1, 2012 Thanks. You gave me some ideas;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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