Guest dunharvestskreech Posted October 24, 2012 Share Posted October 24, 2012 http://soundcloud.com/storytimetrip/galvin first time doing anything with piano Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Marc O Posted October 24, 2012 Share Posted October 24, 2012 I enjoyed it. I could hear a soft female vocalist fitting over this well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted October 24, 2012 Share Posted October 24, 2012 you may not want to use that chord progression as the basis for your song. it just sounds like you're trying to rip off satie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dunharvestskreech Posted October 24, 2012 Share Posted October 24, 2012 oh man that would be cool. i'd love to see how vocals over this would turn out. maybe i could sing in a super girly high pitch over it! you may not want to use that chord progression as the basis for your song. it just sounds like you're trying to rip off satie can't say i know who or what satie is my friend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Marc O Posted October 24, 2012 Share Posted October 24, 2012 you may not want to use that chord progression as the basis for your song. it just sounds like you're trying to rip off satie At the same time though, there are only so many chord progressions out there. Things are bound to overlap oh man that would be cool. i'd love to see how vocals over this would turn out. maybe i could sing in a super girly high pitch over it! For sure, if you end up doing so let us know! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skotosa Posted October 24, 2012 Share Posted October 24, 2012 Not bad reminded me a bit of this at the start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted October 24, 2012 Share Posted October 24, 2012 compare: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S-Xm7s9eGxU http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iHEpuj96bCg these are two of his most famous pieces, and I am not trying to be rude, but your song is just too close to not sound like an inferior version of this edit: At the same time though, there are only so many chord progressions out there. Things are bound to overlap Yes, if you're going to use the very most basic major and minor chords in an uncreative fashion, but there are pretty much infinite possibilities if you approach piano with an open mind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skotosa Posted October 24, 2012 Share Posted October 24, 2012 So that is where its from originally. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Marc O Posted October 24, 2012 Share Posted October 24, 2012 I think if he took the melody and instrumentation elsewhere, it could have its own thing going on that could stand on its own. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dunharvestskreech Posted October 24, 2012 Share Posted October 24, 2012 yep, i see what you guys mean. sounds just like it! oh well. i probably won't do anything with this clip anyway. thanks for introducing me to these artists though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest binauralbeat Posted October 24, 2012 Share Posted October 24, 2012 nice! i like the part before the end when the extra piano bit comes in! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dunharvestskreech Posted October 24, 2012 Share Posted October 24, 2012 thanks binaural! Marc O, i will def post any addition to this one :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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