Guest Ben Serwa Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 Gotta learn somehow. Here's track one (consider it a draft). Constructive criticism direly requested. Benjamin_Serwa__Five_Testicled_Walnut.mp3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest gron Posted October 4, 2006 Share Posted October 4, 2006 Gotta learn somehow. Here's track one (consider it a draft). Constructive criticism direly requested. Simplistic & atonal You have a long ways to go. My suggestion is that, before you explore atonality and minimalism, you increase your knowledge of music theory, you practice programming complex rhythms, you build up a library of sonic textures, learn to mix, equalize, sequence, arrange, harmonize, etc. Once you've done that, you're ready to approach a song of this type and really kill it. As it is, this sounds like a 5 minute job noodled on a midi keyboard, and you should really go back to the drawing board a few times & learn to make listenable tracks before you ask people for their opinions, because it's hard to give criticism for a bare-bones first-try effort. Keep listening to music, keep making new sounds, and once you have something you're quite proud of, put it up here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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