Guest pawwa Posted February 23, 2007 Share Posted February 23, 2007 Hi again, this is the demo of this tune that I`m finally satisfied with, and it will be on my album with some minor changes and better production. If u listen to it, please leave a comment, and say what do you think I should change etc... Thanks! Xiqhhyiecryn___Humandeath.mp3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest yan_g Posted February 24, 2007 Share Posted February 24, 2007 don't like the chord sequence, too simple & banal for my taste. like your sounds a lot tho, and like how it gets intense a about 2:30. i like everything that's happening, to me it only requires a better chord sequence / harmonic evoltution/progression... the melody is ok, it adds to the emotional side of the track. i found it a little long. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TEXX Posted February 24, 2007 Share Posted February 24, 2007 I like it. I liked the melodies, the drums, the whole lot. Good track! Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest pawwa Posted February 27, 2007 Share Posted February 27, 2007 Thanks guys for ur comments! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Glass Plate Posted February 27, 2007 Share Posted February 27, 2007 fun layed back stuff, I dunno kinda stale at times. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tht! tne Posted March 7, 2007 Share Posted March 7, 2007 it definitely improves as it goes along but i agree about the chord sequence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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