Tribal Song with Pan Drum

[android402]

Little song I through together. Not sure if I like it enough to put on an album, but I wanted to see what ya'll had to say about it.

 

http://soundcloud.com/android_402/forest-run

[Guest echidna]

Drums sound boss. The sine pad/melody thing isn't enough. I like the little synth that comes in for a few accent notes in the section starting at 1:15, but I want more. The drums sound epic, but the rest sounds flat. It has this weird sound; it's organic, but not enough to not sound like an electronic track if that makes sense. Play with volume or different samples of the drums more and maybe offset some samples by a little bit to make it sound more uh. Human, I guess? I also want lower lows and higher highs. There are a lot of mids, which is cool, but my ears want other timbral shifts to be satisfied.

 

Super cool track as a work in progress, but it needs some love.