Guest Saraband Posted February 24, 2011 Share Posted February 24, 2011 This is the first track that I have ever released even though I have been making music for about 7 years now. Thank you. Enjoy BlackIris.mp3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dissolvedpaul Posted February 24, 2011 Share Posted February 24, 2011 Hello. Ok, listening just now. First impressions, quite crisp production, good balance on the bass and drum work. Quite a pleasant atmosphere, very laid back. I'm assuming that's guitar work in there(could be wrong), live? Gives it a definite edge that the track needs. Not bad, the different beat introduced towards the end works but it ends fairly suddenly, I'd have liked to hear more transitions or for it to be a bit longer, fairly unfinished feeling as a whole track, as it is,it could work well as an in-between album track. Interesting to hear this is your first release in 7 years, you planning on releasing more? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Saraband Posted February 24, 2011 Share Posted February 24, 2011 Hello. Ok, listening just now. First impressions, quite crisp production, good balance on the bass and drum work. Quite a pleasant atmosphere, very laid back. I'm assuming that's guitar work in there(could be wrong), live? Gives it a definite edge that the track needs. Not bad, the different beat introduced towards the end works but it ends fairly suddenly, I'd have liked to hear more transitions or for it to be a bit longer, fairly unfinished feeling as a whole track, as it is,it could work well as an in-between album track. Interesting to hear this is your first release in 7 years, you planning on releasing more? Thanks for the feedback Dissolvedpaul. The guitar work is live. I'm currently working on an album so their should be more material up soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tonfarben Posted February 25, 2011 Share Posted February 25, 2011 I am too lazy to download. How about putting it up to soundcloud? So that we can listen without downloading? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Saraband Posted February 26, 2011 Share Posted February 26, 2011 I am too lazy to download. How about putting it up to soundcloud? So that we can listen without downloading? Will definitely have a sound cloud for my next release my friend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest mrajh Posted March 4, 2011 Share Posted March 4, 2011 quite nice thoroughly enjoyed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest illfly mandog Posted March 7, 2011 Share Posted March 7, 2011 That was really relaxing man! The guitar definitely set this track off.! will look into more of your posts! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Scrambled Ears Posted March 7, 2011 Share Posted March 7, 2011 really nice but if you wanted it to really hook the listener I would suggest adding another timekeeping element to the beat after the strings come in @ :39...preferably something squelchy hi-pitched and driving Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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