Guest Promo Posted August 2, 2011 Share Posted August 2, 2011 Going back to my routes / original passion for funk and early electro/boogie. This ain't quite on that tip but yeah man just got that love for the funk. Let us know what you thinks. Nize. ;-) http://soundcloud.com/thebro/the-bro-3rd-phase Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest fiznuthian Posted August 3, 2011 Share Posted August 3, 2011 dude honestly i fucking love it clicked your soundcloud while scanning through the hipster thread and put it on, liked it so much i had to seek out this thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Adam Posted August 3, 2011 Share Posted August 3, 2011 You see Bro, when you post in the appropriate forum everyone is nicer. What I think that it's too long, it's hard to fully listen to it and the transitions between different parts are too straight forward. It gets boring after a while when everything happens as you expect. This sounds unfinished imo, you should finish it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Promo Posted August 3, 2011 Share Posted August 3, 2011 Thanks guys .... comments appreciated. Yeah I may go back and have a further play with it. Thanks again. ;-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Promo Posted August 3, 2011 Share Posted August 3, 2011 Yeah mate those are very good suggestions I'll work of them when I get home tonight! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest hahathhat Posted August 3, 2011 Share Posted August 3, 2011 @start: nice disco vibe. i like the inflate intro @0:09: good bassline, but i feel the envelope would benefit from some manipulation. mash the release up here and there, so a note drags on dramatically. do a live recording until it sounds right, as opposed to programming it. @2:52: this should have started 2 minutes ago!! nice 'n' sonic the hedgehog. maybe build it up further by dropping some breaks on top? overall: better than saxstep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Hanratty Posted August 4, 2011 Share Posted August 4, 2011 this is really nice main suggestion would be to play with the drums a bit more? a few more little fills or bringing things in and out? there are lots of little variations (like the backwards clap) but just something a bit more dynamic? like bringing in another hi-hat line or a reinforcing new parts with different drum sounds? like around 0:49 would be a great part to add a heavier kick and snare under that new little melody. and maybe taking out everything but one percussion element (just the kick maybe?) at 1:46 woould make that new part stand out even more. i would've liked to have seen the break at 2:25 go on a bit longer and build more to the new choiry pad part... maybe even just something dubbing out the claps a bit or kind of riding some feedback on them and then BAM into that new part? i definitely appreciate the minimal kind of structure to it otherwise but i think just a bit more rhythmic spice would liven the whole thing up a bit. i think the transitions would seem a little less leaden that way too. really like it though... nice one good critique. i agree. nice track, maybe 90% finished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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