Guest mischjok Posted January 17, 2012 Share Posted January 17, 2012 Hello everyone, this is a tune I am about to finish. I wanted to share it with you and get some feedback. I am not completely satisfied with the song as it is now, so maybe you can point at things that need work: http://soundcloud.com/mischjok/d10349 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest yanG Posted January 19, 2012 Share Posted January 19, 2012 the part around the 1:00 mark should last longer imo. the snare at 2:00 could be brighter/louder. overall it doesn't really sounds like it's going somewhere. some parts need development before the track goes somewhere else. lots of good stuff but overall feels confusing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest mischjok Posted January 19, 2012 Share Posted January 19, 2012 What did you mean with that "Definitely" on SOundcloud? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest yanG Posted January 19, 2012 Share Posted January 19, 2012 i totally agreed with the beat :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SR4 Posted January 24, 2012 Share Posted January 24, 2012 Wow that intro was really full..I liked it...did you sample Orb's Plateau by any chance? Once it kicks into the crazy drum part, I love the ambiance....the drums are a little TOO random to hold my attention tbh...but nice beatwork!!! I like the glitched out cuts with the 4/4 beat around the 1:15-1:30 mark. ok....past 1:30....keep that shit...that shit is gold for me. overall, your programming is very impressive, but its a little too random for me to personally get down with. well done~! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest mischjok Posted January 24, 2012 Share Posted January 24, 2012 I didn´t sample Orb Plateau (wtf is that btw?). The drums aren´t random, I programm all that...I don´t use randomizers, you know. I think yan_g is right when he says the tune still lacks some direction. I will do something about it. lol are those Skrillex´s eyes on that picture? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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