randomAmateur Posted January 22, 2013 Share Posted January 22, 2013 I made this sound a week ago, it's kinda experimental/ambient?!Conventional Hollow 1.58https://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/conventional-hollow------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Didn't touch anything for about a whole week, uhhh now I gotta find a way to produce hiGhEr quality!------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------And 2 olderthe 2nd part is too wierd but I think I'll look at the first part again and maybe work with thathttps://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/2356-sl1Linked that in the other thread already... it's a little painful and later on ~4+ some sounds seem to be to loud or something,but I'm not even sure if it makes a diffrent because the whole song is kinda painfulhttps://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/65sl1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
randomAmateur Posted January 22, 2013 Author Share Posted January 22, 2013 well I just made this toohttps://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/71-sl1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
randomAmateur Posted January 23, 2013 Author Share Posted January 23, 2013 didn't know it's so weak, I'll take the last one off don't wonder. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Friendly Foil Posted January 23, 2013 Share Posted January 23, 2013 The drums in the last track were pretty interesting. A little more progression would have been nice though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
randomAmateur Posted January 24, 2013 Author Share Posted January 24, 2013 When I listen to it through my speaker I feel like everything is wrong and it even sounds preset,on my headphones it's not that bad :)Thx for listening FF! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
randomAmateur Posted January 24, 2013 Author Share Posted January 24, 2013 https://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/76sl1listen & comment!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest active galaxies Posted January 24, 2013 Share Posted January 24, 2013 So, commenting on your most recent track: This is pretty cool (I'm getting Garbage-era Ae vibes), with creative sound choices and it moves forward in a good way. A few things I'd suggest looking at: 1) The main squeaky melody loop is a strong part of the track, but you use it a bit too much without changing it. I would bring in some variations, either subtle or otherwise, by around the 1:30 mark at the latest to keep the momentum going. 2) I would bring the oscillating panned noise in and out of the track more, it's current there for nearly all of it, not sure it has to be, variation and careful changes are always good :) 3) The new melody that comes in at ~2:40 is interesting stuff, there's definitely room here to develop this further and take the track over the 4 or 5 minute mark, if you want to... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crx091081gb Posted January 24, 2013 Share Posted January 24, 2013 I like the selection of sounds but I'm distracted by the pumping on the compression. It's pretty interesting stuff though, I'd do what Bezhin says and take the noise out a bit more often as when it disappears at 2:47 I feel it really lifts the track. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
randomAmateur Posted January 25, 2013 Author Share Posted January 25, 2013 thx for the comments! I'll look at it again, maybe I'll try to make it longer that would be fun.like always this is pretty raw material, no automations as usual.I have a new vst, I like it. Moog V time seems to be over (never is) !! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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