Guest TEXX Posted December 4, 2006 Share Posted December 4, 2006 I'd really appreciate some more feedback! I hate to be all pushy, but i'm really pleased with this, so i really want to hear some different opinions. I don't really care if you think the track is crap if you just explain why. I have added a slightly altered version, and will be awaiting your comments. ...COME ON YOU SLAGS!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted December 4, 2006 Share Posted December 4, 2006 The melodies are good, though I'd probably make the first ping-pong synth sound different, because it sounds too... 8-bit-like. The break 1/4 into the track is great and I like the melody you've got going. I'd seriously consider using some different drumkits, though. Maybe just change the clave, because it has that Yamaha-keyboard-1988-sound to it :) Your melodies are really good, but all you need is to find new drum samples :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest feta lol Posted December 5, 2006 Share Posted December 5, 2006 i have to agree with squee. add something to the ping pong synth, maybe another layer so it sounds deeper. the drums need something as well they sound flat. nice meldoy and it flows nicely. 6.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TEXX Posted December 5, 2006 Share Posted December 5, 2006 I can relate to what you're saying about the drumkit. No reeverb and too shabby (even though i went for an 8-bit style). Replacing it with the cakewalker analogue drumkit should do the trick. I'm glad you thought the ping pong thingy to be 8-bit, because that's the sound i was going for (that's my way of saying i can't fucking change it without ruining the track.) Thanks for the feedback! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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