beneboi Posted March 16, 2007 Share Posted March 16, 2007 Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag http://www.room203.net/pipefist/grey%20rainbow.mp3 it doesnt have vocals yet, so this is just a base track Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag http://www.room203.net/wes/testes.mp3 thats a shitty version that has some vocals but just to test for rhythm purposes any comments are most definately welcome, good or bad, basically im looking for someone to say, hey this sounds shit right here, or this is out of time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beneboi Posted March 16, 2007 Author Share Posted March 16, 2007 Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag http://www.room203.net/pipefist/greywithvox.mp3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest feta lol Posted March 16, 2007 Share Posted March 16, 2007 the piano bits sound too "piano rolled" especially that really happy benny hill sounding part. i prefer a bit muddier guitars, but thats just cause i like a grittier production. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tht! tne Posted March 16, 2007 Share Posted March 16, 2007 masterings fine tis a nice metaphor too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest gurt massif Posted March 17, 2007 Share Posted March 17, 2007 The drums sound very thin and very quiet and it doesnt really sound like everythings in the same place. Meaning the keys and guitar and vocals are kind of right up in your face and the drums and bass sound like theyre somewhere else. You could try setting up a reverb on an aux track and bus all the intstruments to it a little. The vocal needs to sit in with everything a bit better, try some chorus type effects (subtley). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beneboi Posted March 17, 2007 Author Share Posted March 17, 2007 I agree with everything you said. I mixed this together over the course of a few hours while intoxicated, and I ended uo not being able to work on it when i needed to and couldnt finish it. I will now though. Welcome to watmm btw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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