Guest AugmaticDisport Posted March 22, 2007 Share Posted March 22, 2007 Ahoy. I've been lurking around here for a while now so i finally decided i might as well post some stuff. I've been making music on and off for a couple of years. Just screwing around basically... but recently i started to get a little more into it. Below are 3 tracks i've produced over the last few months or so. Any sort of feedback or constructive criticism would be great. Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag Ryme Intrinseca Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag Sufficient Memory Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag Everything Ever Cheers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest splagawaga Posted March 22, 2007 Share Posted March 22, 2007 ryme intrinseca: just listening now, its early-ish the day for me. so this suits me well. really like the orchestra-type samples sloping around in the back. the mood is just right. slightly dark and relaxed. some weird synth ideas in amongst the foreground and glitch. not my taste as it seems to detract from the mood of the backing part. perhaps quieten them a little or make them less descript melodically. just an idea anyway. nice track. sufficient memory: distorted ambient beginning. nice use of vocal samples and odd noise, classic ambient style but i like it, kinda like a radio tuning. i can see a trend with ur style and choice of drums. definately a fan of the snappy drums. as with the previous track this seems to have the same constituent parts, clicky drums, ambient pads and weird synth bleeps altho i really like that warbled squ sound at around 2.20. this is a little less defined than the first. the structure doesnt seem so strong. the weird noises coming in at 2.50 add some interest. but its still a little flat somehow. the new melody part makes for a nice change around 3.30. maybe bring in more high-ended melody to compensate for the low-pass on everything else and bring a new drum part back into to move it into a new section. i guess thats if u want the track to continue. everything ever: cheeky dub type blobby drums. i like the walking feeling of this intro part. then some more melody ideas at 0:50. it has a really nice wandering feeling about this track. although i like the tweak fills on melody and drums. i didnt really like the shortend booop booop booop version of the main ambient part. does work somehow. loses its depth and becomes slightly cheap sounding. hope u know which part i mean. onto the 8-bit section. has a nice chincy warmth to it. and what sounds like a speak-and-spell. m-a-b-a was that? over all this is probably my favorite track, much stronger and more defined than the others. seems as tho u got much more into the making of this one than the others. although i may be wrong. nice tracks to wake up to, gentle and glitchy. im about to upload a new track of mine, so please give it a listen if u get a chance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Wrong Answer Posted March 22, 2007 Share Posted March 22, 2007 Ryme Intrinseca. Wasn't that impressed at first but then it got better and better, by the end I was loving it. The broken sounding melodies and stuttering vocals were the stand out parts for me, I guess you like your minimal parts but for my taste I like it best when you've got quite a few layers going on. Sufficient Memory Lacked some unity but I suppose this is less of a "tune" and a bit more experimental. I dig the deep sense of atmosphere though. Everything Ever Just when the drums were getting a little repetitive for me, things started to glitch out nicely. You have a talent for manipulating subtle little background noises. In my music I tend to be guilty of making everything the "hero" but you have obviously learnt how to set certain sounds into supporting roles. Overall a very impressive body of work, I'm looking forward to you posting more in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest AugmaticDisport Posted March 23, 2007 Share Posted March 23, 2007 Thanks guys. It's nice to get this sort of feedback because i haven't really played my music to anyone other than friends/family. So i appreciate the crits. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Enter a new display name Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 Nice stuff, Andzy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest AugmaticDisport Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 Andzwah??? Thanks, though. :p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beneboi Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 so far ive only listened to the first, but i liked it, i wish the drums that come in and augment the glitch sounded less like drums and just chunkier glitch. not digging the gliding synth that comes wish that it was stuttered or cut up some, oh here we go you bring it in at the end again, and i feel the same way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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