goffer Posted October 9, 2007 Share Posted October 9, 2007 A track I started a week back with my brother and his guitar... Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag There's A Bluebird In My heart EDIT:: changed drums Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chaosmachine Posted October 9, 2007 Share Posted October 9, 2007 there's some good things about this track, but the drum kit sounds really cheesy. if you could rework it to sound like "live" drums, it'd be a lot better. reminds me of "the books". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tht! tne Posted October 9, 2007 Share Posted October 9, 2007 i agree about the drum kit also the guitar sounds like he's playing the beginning of "fight fire with fire" by metallica, which is not a criticism i guess Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goffer Posted October 9, 2007 Author Share Posted October 9, 2007 thanks guys, i'll play around with the drums Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Adjective Posted October 9, 2007 Share Posted October 9, 2007 is that a 707? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goffer Posted October 9, 2007 Author Share Posted October 9, 2007 is that a 707? sampled yes... i usually lay drums out with 707 samples then replace them later but they grew on me in this track after some fine tuning.... I just finished redoing them with some acoustic samples that i tweaked to my liking and agree it's much better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest yanG Posted October 10, 2007 Share Posted October 10, 2007 ok, beginning reminds insstantly of blackbird by the beatles. the beats come in freshly, me likes. get a little too repetitive then. would've expected some synths on top, a new chord progression, something. the production side i dig pretty much, love the sounds used. liked the vibe but found it harmonically too simple & repetitive (and for that matter, too long). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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