Guest Ryan Posted August 20, 2008 Share Posted August 20, 2008 Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag http://agentnerve.headfoam.net/Tunes/Chipped%20Away.mp3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted August 20, 2008 Share Posted August 20, 2008 I'm writing this as I'm listening. I really like the intro. Great athmosphere! Not so keen on the drums. I like the fact that they're so cut-up, but... I don't know? They could use a bit of work since they don't really evolve. The high pitched synth plays some false notes a couple of times - or perhaps the tones aren't intact with the rest of the synths/pads. Actually, the only thing that annoys me is the drums, because this is a rather chilled tracks, and it's as if the drums are living a life of their own. You should slow the whole thing down, remove the beat, and add a killer sub bass line. A bass line so deep that I cream my pants. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Ryan Posted August 21, 2008 Share Posted August 21, 2008 I'm writing this as I'm listening. I really like the intro. Great athmosphere! Not so keen on the drums. I like the fact that they're so cut-up, but... I don't know? They could use a bit of work since they don't really evolve. The high pitched synth plays some false notes a couple of times - or perhaps the tones aren't intact with the rest of the synths/pads. Actually, the only thing that annoys me is the drums, because this is a rather chilled tracks, and it's as if the drums are living a life of their own. You should slow the whole thing down, remove the beat, and add a killer sub bass line. A bass line so deep that I cream my pants. thanks for the critique. you dont even know how long i thought to myself about how terrible the drums are, so i definitely agree there. i use renoise almost exclusively and the drums always end up sounding robotic as fuck. ill work on it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted August 21, 2008 Share Posted August 21, 2008 The drums aren't terrible, but they don't do the rest of the track justice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaffa Posted August 21, 2008 Share Posted August 21, 2008 the drums aren't that bad, good groove, the whole song is just a groove really, nice,maybe needs some developement or something other melodically Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tht! tne Posted August 22, 2008 Share Posted August 22, 2008 i agree with Jaffa, it needs development Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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