Guest illfly mandog Posted June 9, 2010 Share Posted June 9, 2010 been workin this track for a week or so and im kinda hitting a plateau id really like some compositional input. thanks!! Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag http://www.fohdeesha.com/data/music/eric/eptrack3.mp3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest illfly mandog Posted June 14, 2010 Share Posted June 14, 2010 ...bump just lookin for some input Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
4d0 Posted June 14, 2010 Share Posted June 14, 2010 0:34-0:38 or 0:44-0:47 is out of tune for me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest illfly mandog Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 hmmm...nothing is out of key...maybe you just don't like the rhythmic placing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
4d0 Posted June 16, 2010 Share Posted June 16, 2010 0:44;5-0:46;2 part of that synth doesn't fit with the rest of the track, for me maybe it's too loud Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneaksta303 Posted June 16, 2010 Share Posted June 16, 2010 Very convincing Autechre ripoff. Pleasant listen for sure. If I was you, I'd turn those talents toward something more original. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest illfly mandog Posted June 16, 2010 Share Posted June 16, 2010 Very convincing Autechre ripoff. Pleasant listen for sure. If I was you, I'd turn those talents toward something more original. LOL...understandable. Ive only been producing music since Christmas so i hsvent found my own voice yet...but im fuckin tryin hard. (they are the guys to copy though) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneaksta303 Posted June 16, 2010 Share Posted June 16, 2010 Only since christmas? Wow. You got it. Anyhow, I'll give more thoughts tomorrow (well, later today). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Adam Posted June 18, 2010 Share Posted June 18, 2010 fuck, it's good. i really like the drums and all that chaotic stuff around them. but you obvously need to do something with melodies in the begining, they sound a bit lame imho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest bigs Posted June 21, 2010 Share Posted June 21, 2010 really fantastic track. i think rather than a slow buildup, it could use a short one with a big drop. that would accentuate how awesome the percussion is a bit more! the sounds after the percussive breakdown are really fantastic, the track has an amazing atmosphere. i really started around christmas and this song blows mine away! great stuff. can i download it? also, i see a lot of autechre influence, but asides from the percussion (which could use some changing, less glitchy and more thoughtful programming) it seems pretty unique. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest illfly mandog Posted June 21, 2010 Share Posted June 21, 2010 really fantastic track. i think rather than a slow buildup, it could use a short one with a big drop. that would accentuate how awesome the percussion is a bit more! the sounds after the percussive breakdown are really fantastic, the track has an amazing atmosphere. i really started around christmas and this song blows mine away! great stuff. can i download it? also, i see a lot of autechre influence, but asides from the percussion (which could use some changing, less glitchy and more thoughtful programming) it seems pretty unique. Thanks alot man!! The track is not yet finished so there is no dl. sry. Im putting together an Ep soon to be out for free dl, and ill post it here. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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