Ambient techno track i made.

[sergeantk]

So yeah,,, this is actually the first full electronic track I've made on my own (years of playing an instrument though so I'm not a music noob though haha)

 

Any and all advice will help.

 

http://soundcloud.com/shangrilost/cruisin

[robotrobot]

seems to have a lot of high freq white noise in the beginning that returns around 0:41. The snare might be a little dry, feels like it needs a little snap maybe eq. I love the classy loungy chords. They melodic keyboard you use sounds a little dry in that maybe it can be made to flow better with some type of effect kind of the nice reverby sound on the blinky synth that stabs in around 1:52, maybe something like that would work for the key lead. All in all very creative direction. I like.